Wednesday, October 18, 2017

19-10-17
L.G.Use words to convince someone or your idea.

Dear Mr Peters, i would like you to join the national party because they give more money to people that are teachers and hospitals and mechanics and more jobs you should join the national party.

2 comments:

  1. 1)L.G. is there
    2)good reasons
    next step)more full stops???

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  2. spelling good
    good punchowayion
    mke it longer

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